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Derrick good use of sensory details... You got the vibe of what the run meant to you. May want to try and use less passive voice and more active verbs

In reply to https://damatoeducation.blogspot.com/2020/05/daily-writing-prompt-2-sensory-writing.html

Derrick good use of sensory details... You got the vibe of what the run meant to you. May want to try and use less passive voice and more active verbs. Great job setting up the blog! #edu407

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