@dogtrax I added this section: As it slips on spittle Quick slits of Reckon which Beckon Seconds spilt in druel while typing...I am thinking the shorter concise version is better
@dogtrax I have been reading a ton of Mary Oliver she does a ton of broken line and comma twists of meaning. Super hyperlocal Ohio woods poetry to boot
#smallpoems Clocks tick Knuckles bent Two, four, Crack of Ten, fingers of time broken again, As it slips on spittle Quick slits of Reckon which Beckon Seconds spilt in druel. By riddles spit in clues who Fool forgotten time.